The Adventures of the Big Four: Page 1

So I've decided to try to tell a story with my comics. Be forewarned, I've only got this planned out so far. So it might be just as much a surprise for me as it is to you at how this ends.
Also, I can only get so much dialogue in the comic, so you might want to check up in this area for further details.
So without further ado, I present to you page 1 of The Adventures of the Big Four. (Because I couldn't come up with a better title)

Page 2 [link]

Jack is flying around having fun, when he spots a lonly tower in a small aclove. When he investigates, he finds a girl whiling away the hours cleaning and looking board. He confronts her and she asks for his help. Yes she can see him, but this doesn't seem to surprise him.

Thank you for looking

PS: I know the first three pages stink. I actually started with the fourth page, but felt I needed some context, so i quickly threw the first three pages together. Otherwise Jack and Rapunzel's meeting would have been more interesting.

Jack Frost and Hiccup belong to Dreamworks and Rapunzel and Merida belong to Disney.